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電視購物利弊摘要
薛鵬寄語：11月13日小鵬哥預(yù)測(cè)是否應(yīng)該廢除廣告，實(shí)際考察是否應(yīng)該廢除食品廣告。11月22日小鵬哥預(yù)測(cè)網(wǎng)絡(luò)對(duì)于人和社會(huì)的利弊影響，實(shí)際考察的是網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物的利弊。當(dāng)雅思偏冷題目考過之后，雅思寫作回歸熱點(diǎn)。出題形式依然是新瓶裝老酒。背誦過小鵬哥原創(chuàng)語料庫的童鞋們應(yīng)付這兩次考試，博取寫作高分(6以上)阻力不大，祝福大家早日?qǐng)A夢(mèng)。希望大家持續(xù)關(guān)注新東方網(wǎng)雅思頻道，小鵬哥原創(chuàng)語料庫陸續(xù)新鮮發(fā)表。
11月22日雅思A類小作文之表格圖：關(guān)于美國(guó)和加拿大留學(xué)生的對(duì)比。
11月22日雅思A類大作文：
Online shopping is now replacing shopping in store. Do you think it is positive or negative development? 網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物代替實(shí)體店購物，你認(rèn)為這是積極的還是消極的?
請(qǐng)對(duì)比小鵬哥預(yù)測(cè)核心10題之第一題：
一類重點(diǎn)10題(推薦打造個(gè)性范文)
科技類：
People can perform everyday tasks, such as shopping and banking as well as businetransactions, without meeting other people face-to-face. What are the effects of this on individual and society as a whole? 人們可以通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)進(jìn)行很多的日常事務(wù)，不必見面，影響是什么?
薛鵬點(diǎn)評(píng)：網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)達(dá)給人們的生活，學(xué)習(xí)，工作帶來便利。很多人可以遠(yuǎn)程辦公，接受網(wǎng)絡(luò)教育，網(wǎng)絡(luò)創(chuàng)業(yè)，網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物，網(wǎng)絡(luò)交流，例證展開。但是，沒有不長(zhǎng)雜草的花園，網(wǎng)絡(luò)的弊端可以從社交，健康，新型網(wǎng)絡(luò)犯罪等角度展開。
2014年11月22日雅思寫作解析：
利弊討論提問標(biāo)志：Do you think it is positive or negative development?
作家立場(chǎng)：網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物利大于弊，如果揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)避短。
薛鵬原創(chuàng)范文賞析：
首段：背景介紹 + 爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn)+ 作家立場(chǎng)：
Such is nature to own what our hearts desire that is why many modern people like to spend their hardly earned money on their favorite goods. The contrivance of the Internet has profoundly revolutionized modern people’s option of consumption in many aspects. People have been debating the pros of cons of on-line shopping without reaching any definite agreement. Personally speaking, the merits of shopping on line prevail over its possible demerits.
薛鵬點(diǎn)評(píng)：個(gè)性開篇;句型引導(dǎo);明確立常
薛鵬解析：
1. The contrivance of the Internet has profoundly revolutionized modern people’s option of consumption 互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)明深刻改變了人們的購物選擇
2. the merits of …… prevail over its possible demerits …… 的利大于弊
二段：利好的展開：
Seen from the positive aspects, many benefits could be gained by se-le-cting and buying our favorites on line. The most glaring merit is that on-line shopping not only surmounts the geographical barrier，economize great amounts of time, but also improves the flexibility of consumption. In this sense, those who se-le-ct on-line shopping have more time to embark on more worthwhile things such as focusing on working or building up physique. Another advantage coming from on-line consumption is that it adds spice to our dull routine of daily life. A case in point is that a lot of fashionable ladies take pleasure in browsing various on-line shops, comparing different prices and bargaining with the owners of on-line shops. They usually end up buying their desirable goods. Last，on-line shopping will exert a beneficial influence on one’s financial budget due to the fact that on-line shops, in most cases, do not need to rent spacious places or employing many salesgirls, therefore, the price of on-line merchandise is, comparatively speaking, economical and reasonable, which indicates that we can buy more desirable goods even though we are hard-pressed for money.
薛鵬點(diǎn)評(píng)：
二段邏輯清晰: 淡化模板;細(xì)節(jié)展開;表達(dá)精彩。
薛鵬解析：
1. a case in point is that 一個(gè)例子就是
2. in this sense 從這個(gè)意義上講
3. the price of on-line merchandise 在線商品的價(jià)格
4. exert a beneficial influence on 施加了利好的影響
5. comparatively speaking 比較而言
6. be hard-pressed for money 手頭很緊
三段：弊端的展開：
Problems, however, inevitably ensue. On-line shopping is a two-edged weapon which can be used equally for good or evil. One possible demerit is that many on-line advertisements are full of flowery phrases and empty promises, therefore, consumers might be fooled into buying counterfeited goods. Many stories concerning on-line consumption fraud could justify my worry. Even worse，it is highly possible that some young consumers might spend money like water on their favorite goods on line out of the reason of seizing the chances of discount, in this case, on-line buying will impose much pressure upon some unwise consumers economically.
薛鵬點(diǎn)評(píng)：談及網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物的弊端;論證飽滿;體現(xiàn)作家文采。
薛鵬解析：
1. Problems, however, inevitably ensue 然而，問題隨之而來。
2. …… is a two-edged weapon which can be used equally for good or evil. ……是一把雙刃刀，有利有弊。
3. …… could justify my worry. ……可以證明我的擔(dān)憂
4. Even worse，it is highly possible that …… 更加糟糕的是，很有可能
5. spend money like water on …… 揮金如土
6. …… will impose much pressure upon some unwise consumers economically. 對(duì)于非理性消費(fèi)者施加了經(jīng)濟(jì)壓力。
尾段：再次亮明觀點(diǎn) + 總結(jié)理由
Overall, what is of the utmost importance is to harnethe merits of on-line buying and discard its demerits. The government should be urged to strengthen the ce-ns-orship of on-line ads. Meanwhile, it is the duty of every consumer toraise the awareneof wise consumption.
薛鵬點(diǎn)評(píng)：
尾段提出克服網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物的建議：政府加強(qiáng)傳媒審查，個(gè)人提高理性消費(fèi)意識(shí)。
薛鵬解析：
1. wise buying 理性消費(fèi)
2. what is of the utmost importance 最重要的是 ……
3. to harneits merits and discard its demerits. 利用其利好以及摒棄其弊端(揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)避短)
4. it is the duty of every consumer to raise the awareneof wise buying.消費(fèi)者的責(zé)任是提高理性消費(fèi)的意識(shí)。
5. The government should be urged to strengthen the ce-ns-orship of …… 政府應(yīng)該被督促去加強(qiáng)對(duì)于……的審查
薛鵬原創(chuàng)語料庫之網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物(推薦背誦)
1. on-line shopping 網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物
2. to shop on line 網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物
3. buy our favorite goods via the Internet網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物
解析：via = by = by means of= through prep 通過(方式上)
4. The 21st century has witnessed the prosperity of high-tech 21世紀(jì)見證了高科技的繁榮
5. The contrivance of the Internet has profoundly revolutionized modern people’s way of consumption 互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)明改變了人們的消費(fèi)方式。
6. The availability of on-line buying greatly diversifies people’s choice of consumption 網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物使得人們的消費(fèi)選擇多元化。
解析：
diversify v使多元化;enrich v豐富……
7. The price is, comparatively speaking, economical and reasonable網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物的價(jià)格相對(duì)而言是經(jīng)濟(jì)的和合理的。
8. On-line buying has brought huge convenience to our daily lives 網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物給我們的生活帶來巨大的便利。
解析：bring huge convenience to 為……帶來便利
9. On-line shopping not only surmounts the geographical barrier，but also improves the flexibility of consumption. 網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物不僅僅克服地域的障礙，也提高了消費(fèi)的靈活性。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：句型可以寫作原創(chuàng)辦公和遠(yuǎn)程教育。
10. …… have revolutionized people’s life in more ways than one 在很多的方面改變了人們生活
解析：in more ways than one =in many aspects 在很多方面
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