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雅思英語(yǔ)作文：新東方老師談句型的運(yùn)用
句子也是如此，我們提倡簡(jiǎn)煉，但不是說(shuō)都用簡(jiǎn)單句。有人認(rèn)為在寫(xiě)作考試中，采用簡(jiǎn)單句、短句、容易掌握，不在會(huì)出錯(cuò)，因而也最保險(xiǎn)。這話沒(méi)有錯(cuò)，但簡(jiǎn)單句用得太多，造成簡(jiǎn)單句的堆徹實(shí)際上是語(yǔ)言技巧不成熟、不老練，甚至語(yǔ)言水平低下的表現(xiàn)。在閱卷人員看來(lái)，同樣的意思內(nèi)容，一個(gè)考生能夠運(yùn)用比較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)來(lái)表達(dá)，其語(yǔ)言水平當(dāng)然要比只會(huì)用簡(jiǎn)單句來(lái)表達(dá)的考生的語(yǔ)言水平高出一截，就是有點(diǎn)錯(cuò)也不妨礙他比后者取得較高的分?jǐn)?shù)，因?yàn)樗碾y度系數(shù)要高。在某種意義上來(lái)說(shuō)，在詞數(shù)相同的作文中，語(yǔ)言水平越高，語(yǔ)言技巧越熟練，句子的數(shù)目也就越少。這就意味著句子長(zhǎng)了，句子結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜了。
當(dāng)然，我們反對(duì)過(guò)多地使用簡(jiǎn)單句并不是鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生去刻意追求長(zhǎng)句、復(fù)雜句。我們追求的是句子結(jié)構(gòu)的多變。一篇文章能根據(jù)表達(dá)的內(nèi)容使用不同的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，會(huì)產(chǎn)生較好的藝術(shù)效果。
例1
The Career I Pursue的主體段：
A variety of reasons have led me to choose this occupation over other more lucrative ones. First,teaching is learning. To make my lectures more interesting, I have to read more books, explore new knowledge and gain a better understanding of the world—the very thing I like to do in my life. Second, teaching means freedom. As a teacher, I can freely express my opinions and explain them in my own way since nobody will interfere with me. Finally, I like teaching because it offers a certain peace of mind. No more rushing to catching a morning bus, no more anxiety to please a boss, and no more worries about being laid off because you are getting old.
文中有4個(gè)詞的短句First，teaching is learning.也有27個(gè)詞的長(zhǎng)句To make my lectures more interesting，I have to read more books，explore new knowledge and gain a better understanding of the world—the very thing I like to do in my life.有簡(jiǎn)單句，也有復(fù)雜句As a teacher，I can freely express my opinions and explain them in my own way since nobody will interfere with me;還有同位語(yǔ)句，斷裂句，排比句，比較句等，因而文章讀起來(lái)節(jié)奏感強(qiáng)。所謂句子變化，主要是指句子的開(kāi)頭要有變化，句子的結(jié)構(gòu)要有變化，句子的長(zhǎng)度要有變化。不要連續(xù)使用幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句，要學(xué)會(huì)使用復(fù)雜句。
例2
a）Teenagers are pressured by school work. They are also encouraged by their peers. Under such circumstances, they resort to smoking. But sometimes they feel a little guilty.
b）Pressured by school work and encouraged by their peers, teenagers often resort to smok
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