GRE英語作文筆記(二)
一、寫作步驟:
1. skim the question and write the introduction
2. input the topic sentence.找出問題所在,一個(gè)問題一句話
3. develop the body paragraphs one by one.逐一展開問題段落,按重要性遞減的規(guī)律展開
4. conclusion(略)
5. checking
二、開頭段的寫作:
找出原論證的結(jié)論或主張,指出原論證的論據(jù)和假設(shè),指出原論證的邏輯錯(cuò)誤。
忠實(shí)的保留原始信息。用自己的詞保留原始信息。
In this argument / analysis, the arguer concludes / claims that...To support / justify the conclusion , the arguer points out / provides the evidence that...and that...In addition , the arguer reasons(推理)that...
This argument suffers from several critical fallacies / flaws.
三、SURVEY問題:
1. vague => misleading (majority, percent, base number, few, many)
2. question: what questions will ask in the survey? Loaded questions有誤導(dǎo)性的問題
3. Who
4. Average平均數(shù)不適合于每個(gè)成員
5. Confusing causal relationship with correlation混淆因果關(guān)系與相關(guān)性
Every causal relationship implies a correlation, but the statistical correlation does not necessarily implies a causal relation.
6. When was the survey conducted?
7. Are respondents(授調(diào)查者)being forthright(直率,說真話)? Image men / essence men
閃光句型:
1. the arguer over simplifies the issue of...
2. the arguer unfairly assumes that...
3. the arguer fails takesintosaccount other factors that...
4. the procedure of the survey might be problematic.